Pompeii

Pompeii    

Made by: mackenzie patterson

It was summer time in the town of pompeii. It was a nice day ,in  the year 79 A.D. Everyone was calm, they were talking. Pumpkin was walking her dog like normal. She had a grandma, that knew about the mountain. She told her about it. She asked her grandma “what does it look like”? “Sweetheart i don’t know”. “Ohman”  said pumpkin “I really want to hear more”. “Come on candy let’s go for a walk”. “listen to me” said pumpkin to Candy.  There was one person that walked with her and asked to talk. “Who are you said  pumpkin”?  “Oh i’m cupcake”. “Who are you said cupcake”? “Oh me i’m pumpkin”. [kABOOM] “did you hear that”. “Wait a second, what is that red stuff”? “That’s lava I think”!  “Since i live near the water, we can get in my sail boat and be safe” said pumpkin. “Wait what about candy” said cupcake?  “I will be right back” said pumpkin.  “Come on candy let’s go”. [they paddled the boat away from the lava and hot ash] my grandma! nooooooo  “sorry Pumpkin” said cupcake. Hot ash went high in the air but the girls and the dog were too far away to get hurt by it.  “So where are we going said cupcake”?  “I guess we live in a sail boat until someone saves us”.  That is my story of pompeii. pumpkin is me

 

8 Comments on Pompeii

  1. jacksovn
    December 13, 2017 at 2:45 pm (6 years ago)

    I love this story and how detailed it is keep up the hard work your doing it’s amazing.

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  2. hillwortbbz
    December 13, 2017 at 2:49 pm (6 years ago)

    I enjoyed your story because pumpkin was a nice girl and that she found a friend named cupcake.Can you tell me more about how the volcano erupted?

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    • pattermrb
      December 13, 2017 at 3:00 pm (6 years ago)

      well thank you and pumpkin is me. well the ground went burb burb and boom there was the volcano and hot lava every where

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  3. jacksovn
    December 13, 2017 at 2:51 pm (6 years ago)

    🙂 🙂 🙂

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  4. myersebbs
    December 13, 2017 at 3:08 pm (6 years ago)

    I liked your pompeii story and how it was so detailed mackenzie.

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  5. jacksovn
    December 15, 2017 at 4:10 pm (6 years ago)

    I wish you would use actually names and not food names because it messes up the story.

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  6. millerebbs
    December 15, 2017 at 4:12 pm (6 years ago)

    I really like how you said in description that it was a nice day and i like how you even showed the date so they knew what year it was and how it was all calm but I wish you would add a little more to your story.

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    • pattermrb
      December 19, 2017 at 4:07 pm (6 years ago)

      thank you millerebbs for send that if you want to know more i will tell you some more.

      Reply

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