December 21

hypnoteye the final chapter

Chapter 15: Eye see it. The first cave when they found it was about two miles long and was really straight. There was not too many traps in this cave. Then they went searching for the next cave to search then ran into their old nest and said to themselves “Be careful for that tribe like group.” They were able to get through without being spotted. But now they had to find the next cave.

 

They ran into a few more areas with traps we supposed were traps the tribal team setup to catch us when we escaped. Like they knew that we were going to escape. They would’ve had no time to set it up from the time that we left. Tne they found a clue book. It said the last cave no matter what was going to be the cave with the book. They found the next cave all it was.

 

It was a den for the people that held us captive they had way better prison cells there. So they went to the next cave still running into traps got there even with the traps. They went into the cave it was a dark cave and there were bats that kept flying out at them. Then they saw the book it was a book that made your life normal and gave you back the hypnoteye.

              The End


Posted December 21, 2017 by martin52q in category Hynoteye

3 thoughts on “hypnoteye the final chapter

  1. Graham M

    Jevon,
    I wish you would continue this story. I really enjoyed how it progressed. I wish it would go on for longer.
    Thank you for entertaining me for 15 chapters.
    I might come out with a story of my own because you inspired me.
    Thanks again,
    Graham

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  2. martin52q (Post author)

    we are writing a second book so stay tuned you might come on and have a second story to read. thanks for your comment and the inspiration to write the second book.

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