Antonio Brown
By:Ashton
Antonio Brown is the star Wide Receiver for the NFL steelers. Antonio Brown scored 12 touchdowns in the 2016 NFL season this year. Antonio Brown is number 84, and gained 1,284 yards in this years season. Antonio Brown went to Miami Norland High School in Miami. Brown grew up in Liberty City, Miami. Antonio Brown’s hand length is 9 inches, that makes him a good wide receiver. Antonio Brown’s arm length is 38 inches. His weight is 186 pounds. His time for a 40 yard dash is 4.48 s. Antonio Brown is my favorite player, and I hope you learned more about him!
Information from wikipedia.
Ashton,
Your facts are accurate and interesting. My only suggestion would be to try to avoid starting many of your sentences with “Antonio Brown…” One way to avoid this is by combining 2 sentences. For example, “Brown grew up in Liberty City, Florida and went to Miami Nirland High School in Miami.”
Thank you for giving such great feedback to my students. I want them to understand that the world is their audience and sometimes hearing it over and over from me can become background noise. Thank you again.
Hi Ashton
I’m Lebron ( https://lebrononlinen.edublogs.org/ ) and I’m from Montreal, Canada. I’m a huge football fan! If you like the Steelers I’m sorry that my favorite team, the Patriots, beat your team in the playoffs. Seeing Antonio Brown’s 40-dash reminded me about the NFL combine. Did you see John Ross’s record breaking 40-yard dash? I hope your favorite player will finish his career healthy and make the Football Hall of fame.
-Lebron
Hello Ashton,
I am not big about sports but that’s pretty interesting facts in there. You must have done a big research on Antonio Brown, you even put how much he weighed.
Bye,
https://daisyonlinep.edublogs.org/
Dear Ashton,
I really like how you gave a good short explanation on who Antonio Brown is. I don’t really know much about football players, but reading this taught me more about a new football player. I also like how you told what team he plays for and what position he plays. I also have one question, if you had to like another player who would it be, and why?
By the way, you should come check out my blog. https://www.writeabout.com/members/lb7852-victor/
Thank you all for commenting, please come back to my blog another time, I will be sure to check out your blogs, thank you!!!?
Hi there,
My name is Merry Beau and I am your student blogging challenge mentor. I will be popping in to visit your blog over the course of the challenge and seeing how you are getting on.
I teach children between the ages of 4 and 12 and I am from Ireland. I have two grown up children: one is a midwife and the other hopes to join the Irish army shortly. My hobbies are blogging and gardening. I would on our school website and three school blogs; my own class blog, a Green Schools blog and a history one. Here is a link to our class blog http://merrybeau.edublogs.org/category/student-favourite/
I also love walking our dog. She is a seven year old Japanese Akita and is a very loyal and protective member of our family.
My class and I have done the student blogging challenge in the past.I see you have too. So you will know that if you ‘keep with it’ you will learn a lot. As Ms.W says you can choose from the suggested activities to do what really interests you. That way blogging is such fun. Well done on your awesome avatar. If you get a chance you could add a 2017 Student Blogging Challenge badge. I can’t seem to see one on this page. Glad to see you have an All About Me page
It would be lovely to hear back from you. Otherwise I feel like I am talking to myself. Part of the fun of blogging is getting to hear from people all over the world. As Miss W. says if you finish your tasks why not visit other student bloggers and leave a comment to say hello.
With every good wish
Hello Again from Ireland.
Wishing you a Happy St. Patrick’s Day for Friday 17th March. We here in Ireland have no school on that day and many of the children will be marching in the St.Patrick’s Day parade. Many of them will be marching with a sports club or youth group that they belong to.
Do you belong to any sports or hobby group? When I was your age I belonged to a swimming club and a choir. The children I teach belong to lots of clubs. They seem to do at least as many after school activities as there are working days in the week: activities like theatre group, yoga, rugby, basketball, science club and art. Some children are so busy they have more than one after school activity in a day.
Spring has arrived here in Ireland. We have had a very mild winter, but see on the TV news that Pennsylvania has had some snow recently. I hope it did not cause too much disruption. However, even though the weather is Spring like this week, the weather forecast for St.Patrick’s Day is for light rain and wind.
I am really hoping for a reply from you. It would be fun to get a conversation started.
So long for now, with every good wish, Merry Beau
No I’m not in anything right now, everything ended. Lucky you get ST. Patricks day off, we were in school that day. You teach between the ages of 4 and 12, do you work in a school house? Today is are very first day of spring. Happy blogging!!!
Hi Ashton,
Thank you for visiting our blog. Where I work in Ireland is called a primary school or national school. Most children attend these schools between the ages of four and twelve. Then they go to secondary school until they are about eighteen.
We love sport.
Sports in our school include Hurling and Gaelic Football,
Basketball, (There is a basketball league on during the summer term. At the end of the year 6th class get to play the teachers. Everyone enjoys watching this game! Usually the teachers win.)
Athletics, (We learn how to do the shot putt, long jump, high jump, 100 metre sprint and relay races.)
also Swimming,
Badminton
and Tennis.
Everything is good with us in school in Ireland. Thanks for asking.
Do you have any holiday plans?
With every good wish
Merry Beau and Class.
Antonio Brown comment
I liked how you put how much touchdowns he had in the season and his number. I wish you put some of his outside life and his family and how much money he makes. I wonder if you will make more player stories
Helllo Ashton
Antonio Brown is one of my favorite NFL players I find hes one of the best. My first one is Tom Brady and then its Antonio Brown.
Have a nice day
Cristiano online ttps://christianoonlinep.edublogs.org
WHAT, Tom Brady, why?
Sorry Ashton but the Eagles just got some brand new players so beware. I liked everything about the blog post except for Antonio Brown. I wasn’t expecting that hand length. PS: Carson Wentz ??
Sorry Ashton but the Eagles just got some brand new players so beware. I liked everything about the blog post except for Antonio Brown. I wasn’t expecting that hand length. PS: Carson Wentz is beast boy. Eaglesssssssss!? ??
Hi Ashton,
Thank you for the comment you left on our class blog.
Yes the teachers versus students match is GREAT fun.
It is a highlight of the school year.
Do you have any school traditions that you enjoy?
With every good wish
Merry Beau and Class
Hi Ashton,
I am visiting the blogs of all the students I mentor to check in on their progress. I see that you have an About Me page and are doing some of the challenges. I also see that you are commenting and I know you are visiting blogs. Great to see that you are on board with the Student Blogging Challenge 2017. If you have time, perhaps you could put up the badge for this year’s blogging challenge.
Keep blogging, With every good wish, Merry Beau
Hello again Ashton,
Thanks for getting in touch again.
You mentioned PSSA in your message so I googled PSSA.
I found out you were talking about ‘Pennsylvania System of School Assessment’.
We have our standardized tests in May.
Good luck with yours.
With every good wish
Merry Beau
I will also find it very helpful if you put up the Student Blogging Challenge badge for 2017. That way when I visit your blog I am sure you are taking part. http://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/2017/03/07/2017-student-blogging-challenge-badges-are-here/
I see that you were very busy in the Blogging Challenge for 2016. I also see that you are very busy with other school assignments on your blog. However putting up the badge, adding an About Me page and perhaps using the hashtag #stubc17 would let me see that you are on board with the Student Blogging Challenge for 2017.
Hello again Ashton,
I hope all is good with you. I just saw your About Me page at the top of the page, however a 2017 badge would be great.
Ms.Wyatt has put up a really interesting set of challenges this week on family, culture and your home country. I really look forward to seeing which challenge or challenges you choose and what you write.
You can see what she is suggesting here:
http://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/2017/04/09/week-5-culture-and-family/
You are all doing SO well in Mr.Geiman’s class on the Student Blogging Challenge, that I suggest that you aim to do your VERY best work and if you are REALLY proud of it, that you draw Ms.Wyatt’s attention to it by posting a link to it on this page. She may feature it on the Flipboard magazine or give your work a mention in a post later on in the challenge.
If I see any TRULY wonderful work on your blogs between now and the end of the challenge I plan to pass the link on to Ms.Wyatt also.
NOW. THIS IS IMPORTANT… If you are sending a link to the post you feel you have done really well DON’T sent her a link to your whole blog. For example this is a link to our class blog. http://merrybeau.edublogs.org/
Instead send Ms.Wyatt a link to the actual post. For example this is a link to a special post on our class blog that we wrote for the students in Mr. Geiman’s class http://merrybeau.edublogs.org/2017/04/09/a-special-post-for-mr-geimans-class-in-pennsylvania-usa/
This is because there are over two thousand students doing the student blogging challenge and if Ms.Wyatt is directed to a blog it would take time for her to find the actual post that you would like her to see.
With every good wish and wishing you a Happy Easter,
Merry Beau
Hello again Ashton,
This week Ms. Wyatt says you should prepared for a game that will be coming up as part of the Student Challenge in a couple of weeks. In order to be prepared she you like you to have at least 5 other student blogs linked on the sidebar of your blog, in a page near your header area or in a recent post that your visitors can find easily. Make sure these are blogs from other students around the world, not just those in your class or school. Perhaps have a blogroll or link category called Global students or Global classes. You can read how to do that on this link: http://help.edublogs.org/blogroll/
Ms. Wyatt also says ‘Having read many of your posts, I came up with the following essentials in a great post.
• catchy title
• includes at least one visual (with attribution) whether photo, cartoon, video or another web 2.0 tool like padlet or glogster
• interesting topic with the passion of the author coming through
• well written and not copy/pasted from somewhere else
• shows it has been proofread and spellchecked
• written in paragraphs – at least three of them
• includes links to other websites on similar topics – at least two of these’
I would agree with Ms.Wyatt and in particular I would say that visuals are important. So is checking one’s spellings. Sometimes, I have seen lovely posters made that were very visual, but a spelling mistake on the poster took away from the overall effect.
Ms. Wyatt asks that ‘When you have finished your post, please come back here to the blogging challenge and leave a comment on this post’.
Here is the link to the post she is talking about: http://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/2017/04/23/week-6-what-to-write-about/
She asks that you ‘mention what topic you wrote about and leave a link to your post’….not a link to your blog but to the post.
She says that if your posts covering the seven things mentioned above e.g. has a catchy title, includes at least one visual etc. etc., it will be added to the flipboard magazine.
Here is a link to all Ms. Wyatt said this week, https://studentchallenge.edublogs.org/2017/04/23/week-6-what-to-write-about/
Have a good week and good luck with your blogging.
With every good wish
Merry Beau
This is was really cool. I learned some facts about Antonio Brown that I never actually knew. I must say that I love the steelers as well however my favorite team is the Cowboys mostly because of Ezekiel Elliot and Dak Prescott. I hope you get the chance to visit my blog that would awesome!
http://makaelal.edublogs.org/