Once upon a time, There was a village over mountains, and oceans, hills and rainbows lived a tiny little village with fairies different sizes. I mean it. The smallest fairy was bullied and pushed around , but she was the toughest fairy in all the fairy lands . Her muscles were bigger than her body .The boys were regretting to mess with her . There are also little lakes with tiny mermaid fairies .Technically there was a place for all kinds of fairies . Even albert fairy . ( he was the wise fairy everyone can go to.) The baby fairy cried the loudest cry he balled and he balled and he never seemed to stop . The judge fairy was the meanest fairy.There were even animal fairies! Troll fairies to!
The funniest fairy was sideways fairy. He was almost all sideways.He flopped all around and every time he walked he fell and it was historical. Then, one day they discovered ( actually Albert ) that they had an enemy name Margamel . Gargamel’s younger sister who likes fairies and wanted to capture them like Gargamel wants smurfs. Also, Margramel has a pet dog named Arzel. Interesting right? Then one day Margamel saw a fairy home saying no fairies here 12 more hours north. Margamel went north 12 more hours than 12 hours later she saw a bridge she went across and two of the meanest fairies took the stakes out! NO this is horrible than 100 fairies saved her and put her on the opposite side so they wouldn’t get them.
The fairies started to fly home to their village.12 hours later they arrived.Home sweet home they all shouted.Ba ba bababa sing a happy song.Babababababa sing a happy song Bababababa they sang all day long. “Stop!” , One of the fairies yelled! It was Gouchy spider fairy. Wait who is that he isn’t a fairy! “I know I want to be a fairy so I won’t be grouchy” He said. “Fine then OK” ,They all said. “ We have to get back home first.”Queen fairy said. They all flew home. Except grouchy spider . “Today we will be accepting a new member grouchy spider”,Queen fairy said happily. “They all cheered and welcomed Grouchy Spider.” They finally gave him wings. To be continued ….
Great start to your story girls. I like the way you have included images taken by Leila.
One point though, you need to proofread a bit more carefully before hitting the publish button. For example your fullstops (or periods), they should have one space after them. In your first paragraph you have a space before the period and in the third paragraph you have no space after the period.
Thank you Miss W. we will fix our mistakes and make sure we reread it.