10 year old, Jason Grace gone 5 months in Greenland
Today was the day I go to see my father in Greenland. I board the plane and then we take off. Later, I noticed we were sinking quite quickly and decided to jump. I barely hit the water and swam to land.
There I saw lots of ice and decided to sharpen some of the ice. There was lots of seals nearby, so I threw the ice at them and hit one in the neck. I ran over to make sure it was dead. After that, I made a little igloo out of some ice. Then I went to bed.
I woke up to a deep “GGGGRRRRR” I looked outside and saw a mama bear with her cubs killing and eating seals. I hid in my shelter until the growling stopped. Then, I looked outside saw something in the water.
It was shipwreck. It had wood, matches, and even a fishing pole. I went fishing and caught fish. Then, I cooked the fish and the seal from yesterday. After I ate I went to find the plane. Once, I found the plane I saw a radio and flicked the switch a few times. Soon enough, a rescue plane came and saved me.
The End.
I think you could have added a bit more to that story.
That was a good story but how did he sharpen the ice? what did he sharpen it on? you need to have more detail. 🙂
I agree with them. But otherwise I enjoyed it! ;D