Feels

I’m sitting on the end of the dock and enjoying the sun light and my feet in the water, everything was going great. Then for some reason I got the urge to go for a swim, so I take off my shirt and jump in the water and swim so far out that I cannot reach the bottom. I am out there weighting to water when I get a weird feeling like something isn’t right, but I could figure it out, so I start to swim back to land and the sense of feeling gets stronger, and I don’t feel so good anymore, like something is just there waiting for me, so I start to swim faster trying to get back to the dock. I make it to the dock and go to the bathroom and look in the mirror, I then peer at a stall and go into it and sit, “I had to poop” “that’s what that feeling was”

10 thoughts on “Feels

  1. This is genius. I was not expecting that at all. I love the way this is the story that came to mind while writing about a picture of a dock.

  2. That was a very unexpected turn at the end. I like how you used the beginning to make it seem like a completely different story.

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