Cheesesqueak Part 1: The Short Part
Cheesesqueak Part One
The Short Story By: Ashlyn
There is a little cage with a lot of mice in a pet store called PetSmiles, and there is a mouse that Billy, the little kid who lives next to the pet shop, and he is the 2nd grader who likes to help out in his dad’s friend’s dad’s brother’s wife’s friend’s wife’s husband’s pet shop. So yeah, and so as I said before, the pet shop’s name is PetSmiles, and like so Cheesesqueak was running all over the place. One day he ran out of his cage and out of the pet shop doors. “Cheesesqueak! No!” But Cheesesqueak already crossed the street. “Eek! I am getting spun around! This cannot be good!” Cheesesqueak said. Then Cheesesqueak got caught in a cage. To be continued in Cheesesqueak Part 2…
1.I really liked your amazing story you explained everything clearly
2.When is the next part coming out?
3.Maybe use another word than running like ‘sprinting’
Thanks. The next part is coming out in a few days. I did not use the word sprinting though.