I woke. I got up confused of where i was at or how i got there i got up and instantly layed back down my chest and back leg hurt a lot it didn’t smell like the nursery or the medic den i slowly got up and limped outside suzkans sent hit my face as she ran into me and squeezed me so tight i didn’t know why she was so excited to see me until suzkan sat down and looked at the ground and then finally said “ how do you feel?”
I responded “uh shaky confused and ouch!” i said as something soft shoved me back down into the moss below him. He looked up and saw and beautiful mix of colors black white and red the thing brushed past suzkan whispered something in her ear and walked out of the bush like cave. Suzkan came over to me and said “that is a fox she said her name was whisper she’s very quiet but when i saw her she helped me carry you” she stopped and then said “when you got hit by the monster” I was very confused but i thought “wow im alive?!” he glanced at suzkan and stood up slowly and she helped him walk out of the den to a bright sunshine and pretty oak’s i noticed a big gash in my side and saw whisper again she was curled up on the ground watching us with amber eyes he noticed a big scar across her face and he thought about what might of happened to her. The fox glided over the ground after us as we walked i could feel her tail touch my side ounce or twice like she was making sure i didn’t fall over. I rolled my eyes i hated being fussed over to much so i nudged suzkan away from my side and carefully walked beside her but not leaning. He gently hopped up to an rock and layed down glaring at an robin that was cooing loudly above him. Whisper was talking with suzkan her tail was swishing across the ground in an delecet way. I jumped when an deer came running out into the clearing there was a red flash and there was whisper sitting next to the young deer it was dead. She called me over to the deer and we ate. My wound felt better by the end of the day. I asked suzkan “where are we anyway shouldn’t we go back to the pack?”
She said softly “gosh you just got hit by an monster calm down the pack doesn’t help weak orphaned pups”. “oh yeah, forgot” i answered in an discouraged tone. You’ll be ok soon as long as the wound keeps healing suzkan said glancing at the deer and said “why don’t we just enjoy our deer shall we?”.
Hewo Sherry, it’s Shanealei. I’m responding to the slideshow, you responded on. It’s like a document!
Make the slideshow
Hit “file”
Go to “publish to the web”
Go to “embed”
click publish
Copy the link to a blank new
Post and put the link into “text”
Wwalaa…..dont ask…also neat story!
Hey Sherry! Nice little story you got there! I liked the interesting beginning it was kinda confusing but made sense after a while. I wish you would have made it a little bit more clear of who’s perspective was when. I wonder if you are going to make a second one? Please come to my blog: http://blog.elanco.org/reicha283/ Thanks -Courtney 🙂