blog challenge week 2

I visited Rachel! I posted a comment because I thought that she wrote a lot of important guidelines on “Rachel’s commenting guidelines”

Hi Rachael! I enjoyed reading your guidelines. I wish that you could have added more guidelines. Which guideline do you think is most important?

Another blog that I visited was Darcey’s  blog. I visited Darcey’s blog post because they used vivid words to describe their guidelines on “Student blogging challenge: Commenting”

Hi, Darcey! I’m Georgina and I think that you added some good advice on how to post a quality comment. What is the most important rule do you think is most important to include in a quality comment?

I also visited Kyndal’s blog. I commented on her blog because she added very useful information and was very specific on how to write/post a quality comment! I visited her blog post titled “How to comment”

Hi Kyndal! I enjoyed reading your blog. I also like how you were so specific about how to write a quality comment. Did you enjoy making these guidelines?

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Last but not least, I visited Sophie’s blog! I commented on her blog because I thought that she added a lot of important details. Visited on her “Student Blogging Challenge – Week 2” post!

Hi Sophie! I enjoyed reading your guidelines on posting a quality comment! I think that you did a fantastic job adding details. Do you think that you added all of the most important guidelines? I think that you did great

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free write 3/18

“Wow!” This is amazing,I’ve just found the most enormous Beanstalk ever! Once I managed to climb the Beanstalk I found a huge castle. ” Can this day get any longer?” I thought. Too late, because it just did. I looked up and saw the biggest penguin I’ve ever seen (At least I think it was a penguin). It had the biggest flippers, But it turned out to be a gorilla or an extremely tall person. Anyways, whatever this “thing” was it caught a glimpse of me snooping around and started chasing me! I went around and about but it was no use, I just couldn’t get him to get lost. The only thing I managed to get lost was my mind!

How can drama help you better understand the feelings and viewpoints of characters?

Drama can help you better understand feelings and the viewpoint by how the setting is. Drama is a type of way people act. They act happy, sad, mad, lonely, etc. Drama can also help you better understand what is going on by the sound of their voice they could sound frightened, excited, or angry. A person could have facial expressions too. Some may be a grin, smile, gloomy, or twisting your face.( Which means you’re mad.) One more thing that could help is the dialogue. If it has an exclamation point, it either means they are happy or mad, it depends on the way they say it in your head.

Drama can also help you understand the conflict better by how they act the could act sneaky, happy, sad or excited. Another way drama can help you better understand is when they express their personality if the author/narrator describes the character.  When they express their personality, it’s either happy, sad, mad, gloomy, or excited. They have to express feelings somehow. So I think they could by saying it in a voice that is familiar. The last thing you can do to express your feelings is how they sound. They sound mad, sad, or happy sometimes. I think that is really cool and I can also understand better.

Drama can also help you better understand by how the characters respond to each other. Like how they talk to each other they might yell at each other. The characters can also act in different reactions. I think that if they don’t have any type of expression, you can’t understand what they are feeling. Are they mad, sad ,happy, We don’t know. I think we should have expressions in all books and plays.

Allison’s favorite memory!

Allison’s Favorite memory was when she went on a vacation to Florida. She was 9 years old when she visited Orlando, Florida.She enjoyed going to Seaworld, an indoor pool, going go-carting and she also go to spend time with her cousins. She got there by car which took 24 hrs. to arrive in Florida!

 

She stayed in a rental house during her stay. She stayed at Florida for a whole luxurious week. The most amazing thing she did there was swimming with her cousins.Something that she simply didn’t enjoy was the cereal at her rental house.

One difference that she found between Pennsylvania and Florida was that in Florida there is more sand. She prefers to stay in Pennsylvania than Florida because of her precious family.she also bought a stuffed whale from seaworld as a souvenir. Allison also stated that It was much hotter there than in Pennsylvania, the temperature was about 80 degrees fahrenheit including one day of rain. One of the restaurant’s that she visited was Arby’s. Something she found unusual was that there were alligators at the go-carting place.That was Allison’s favorite memory and why!

free write 3/7

“Tweet, chirp,tweet!”. Hello my name is Sparkles and I am a 2 yr. old parakeet. I was named “Sparkles” because I LOVE Sparkles…… A lot! My entire cage is sparkly even all of my toys! It might sound like a crazy name but, sparkles are amazing and my owners named me that so i’m stuck with that name. All of my visitors always call me “original”, whatever that means.I love being the best attraction in the whole zoo. I have light blue feathers and an extra glittery or you could just say sparkly skirt and I also have a pretty pink sparkly bow and people that visit me always take a TON of photos, and this one dude even made a deal with my owner that I might even star in a photo shoot! Crazy, isn’t it?