Monthly Archives: March 2017
- Look at the picture (->)
- “Zoom” out with you eyes.
- What’s happening?
If you are the first person to comment then you get to “zoom” out first.
Then, the next person to comment has to read the comment before theirs and write what happened after that.
This keeps continuing…..
THANKS FOR READING! Pixabay
I put a duck on my shoulder because I have 2 little brothers who both love playing in the bath. I put a burger on my face because I like burgers. Finally, I put a monster on my shoulder because I thought it would look funny. This is what I did to make this picture funky.
P.S: I edited this photo at BeFunky.
One day, Macy and Carina were exploring Paris. They lived in Serbia but they had come to Paris for a vacation. They had wanted to go to the Eiffel Tower that same night. But this was the last elevator going up to the top and there was only room for one more person in the elevator.
WHAT HAPPENED NEXT……
Finish the story for me in the comments. Thanks!
HOW TO SUCCESSFULLY MAKE A COMMENT
To make a good comment you should use STARS, WISHES and WONDERS.
STARS: Stars are the things that you like about the story.
A girl was wandering along in the woods. She was looking for her dog, Daisy. Then, she suddenly heard a noise. “What was that?!” she wondered. Then suddenly… Daisy came up behind her and scared her. “Oh, Daisy, it’s just you. Let’s go home.” They went home and they were happy.
Example of a STAR: ‘I like the way you used punctuation.’
WISHES: Wishes are the things that you wish that the writer added to the story.
“Safelite repair, Safelite replace.” i heard on the TV. i was waiting for the commercials to be over so i could go back to my favorite show… Corn is Born On the Unicorn! It is the best show in the universe! i love it!
Example of a WISH: ‘I wish that you capitalized the I’s in your story.’
WONDERS: Wonders are the things that you wonder about a topic.
Abraham Lincoln is known for being the sixteenth president of the United States. He ended slavery. He also led us in the Civil War. Abraham Lincoln was sadly assassinated by John Wilkes Booth at a theater.
Example of a WONDER: ‘I wonder when Abraham Lincoln was born and when he died.’
- Make sure that at the end of a comment you put you blog URL at the end of the story.
Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah. Blah Blah Blah Blah. Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah. Please come and visit my blog and leave a comment at Your blog URL.
- When you are done writing your comment always proofread it. Make sure that you spelled everything correctly and you have a STAR, WISH and a WONDER and your BLOG URL.
These are some of the things that you should have in a good, quality comment.