The trip

It started in a new pink house. a mom named rosseta She was about to go on a trip to the beach she had two kids one boy and one girl.They were named Daniel and Kathran they hopped in the car  and headed of to the beach. Daniel found a rock when he got to the beach he found a rock it was black with a carving of a triangle he thought it was cool so he put in the car he found it when he got  out of the car.Then later that day on the beach he found more of the rocks so he put the in his book bag later that day the went to the hotel.Then they went to bed then in the morning the went to go seashell hunting the boy found more rocks and put them in his bucket.Then they went back to the hotel he didn’t want his mom to see the rocks because she did not like rocks so she would tell him to put it back so he did not show his mom later that day the went home and they unpacked so Daniel just took his bag to his room and he sat in the corner of his room and he rubbed the rocks together and a evil invisible spirit cam out of the carving and it possessed him and the boy wrote on the wall im back in red marker so then he stared throwing things and his mom came up stairs with his sister the boys eyes turned red and his sister ran down stairs screaming and his mom went and got the phone she call the emergency room and they came and took him and they got the spirit out of him and they took the rocks and buried the in a little box with a big lock.

2 thoughts on “The trip

  1. Hello, Kayley. its Samie S i really liked how you put so many details in the story. I wish you added more on what they did in the car on the way to the beach. I wonder how long it took to get to the beach? please visit on my blog and answer my question at http://blog.elanco.org/shollysbz/ Happy blogging!

  2. hi Kayley its Ashley I like your story and I wish that you would fix your mistakes in your story and I wonder if you have a lot of people that commented on your blog and I also wonder if you are going to write another story so that a lot more people will go and comment on it and I also wonder how you got then videos about the animals like a bunny,and A raccoon and I also wonder if you really like animals or not please come to my blog and answer my question here it is http://blog.elanco.org/BairT90/

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