Pompeii
In 79 AD I woke up one morning It seemed like normal day, then i looked at the beautiful mountain.Then I went downstairs to eat breakfast “and by the way my name is grant and i am 16 years old”. After I ate breakfast my brother came down.I asked him what he was doing because he was dressed up. He told me that he was going to a date. What is the girl`s names?” I said” lilly” ok ,bye”.After that mom came down and she said”, what is jacob doing going to a date with lily? ok”.Then my mom left to get Jacob to come back to the house. So I just sat around, then Dad came down. Where is mom and Jacob” Jacob is going to date if a girl named lily and mom went to chase after Jacob” “ok” got it”.Did you eat breakfast yet? yay “ok just making share”.after dad left to do work outside I heard a big rumble I thought it was just me, then my dad came running in and shout the door really hard “did you hear that big rumble yay what was it? I don’t know” .The next day later I was sleeping in my bed then a min later there was a big rumble that woke me and my brother up.Jacob asked me what was that noise and I said I don’t know.After that I looked out the window there was big dark clouds coming in, i was running down stairs to go outside to see what was happening.My brother came down stairs with me ,but, he can’t go out because he got in trouble for going on a date. if Lily so I would have to go outside by myself.I did i opened the door.It was so dark it looked like it was night time,but it was only noon.After I looked outside, my mom came down stairs.My dad I asked my mom,” why it was so dark outside? I don’t know” she said. Then, there was huge rumble. It shocked the whole house.After the big rumble I was working to fix the house. Then there was another big rumble, but this one shook the whole town.Then I looked out the window.There was lava and ash coming out of the mountain, so I went up stairs and told them that there was lava and ash coming out of the mountain. We ran out the door to go to the water and hopp on boat.While I was running to the water, I sawa little baby lying on the ground so I picked the baby up and ran to the boat.I got the boat with the baby and my brother and my mom and my dad, then we padded away from our home. This was probably the hardest thing we ever faced before.Now I can say that I survived the Pompeii volcano.
The end
7 comments
fryhunbbs says:
December 13, 2017 at 2:50 pm (UTC 0)
i love your story about this disaster.
jacksovn says:
December 13, 2017 at 2:54 pm (UTC 0)
Your story is great I love all the details you used:)
myersebbs says:
December 13, 2017 at 3:00 pm (UTC 0)
I liked your story about pompeii
hillwortbbz says:
December 13, 2017 at 3:05 pm (UTC 0)
I enjoyed your story because I thought it was funny that jacob went on a date with lily.
swens1jx says:
December 13, 2017 at 3:09 pm (UTC 0)
i like how you used jacob’s name and youers
smithnas says:
December 15, 2017 at 4:15 pm (UTC 0)
I like when the volcano erupted and I like that you are 16 and visit my blog
fryhunbbs says:
December 15, 2017 at 4:19 pm (UTC 0)
i like when the rubble shook the house and i wish you put more facts in i wonder that you told more about the town and what it looked like hunter.