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What is my perfect day?

October 26, 2017 - story's

My perfect day is a day where i get to do anything i want. To be more specific, my perfect day would go like this… first, i wake up and it’s a sunny day, all is ok until i go down stairs and i see breakfast. The breakfast is, eggs, bacon, toast, a banana, orange juice. Of course the day has gotten better. After eating i would go upstairs and play video games. I would play video games for about 1-2 hours before, my friend rings my doorbell and we go outside and play. We would play until about 6pm, and then go inside with them and play more games. After this, the time would be 7:30pm. At that time he would leave, and i would,go downstairs and eat dinner and watch a movie. When the movie ends it will be late and i’ll go upstairs and fall asleep to YouTube. That is my perfect day and what it’ll be like, thanks for reading my story and i will see you next time!

5 thoughts on “What is my perfect day?

courtn7x2

I like how you told me information about your perfect day I wish you can split it up so I can read it better. I wonder If You can fix some of your grammar.

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courtn7x2

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Kasundi

Hello Conner,

My name is Kasundi from Wilderness School in Australia.
I am from year 6.

I liked your perfect day story but think you should put capital letters on the I.
It was very interseting to read.
Thank You

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http://kasundiw617.edublogs.org/

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phippsa11

Hi Connor! Its Leah and I really like how you explained what you would do after everything. I wish you would’ve made this post a little longer.I wonder what movie and what kind of youtube videos you would watch? Come visit me at:http://blog.elanco.org/phippsa11/

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Cassidy

Hi Conner! It’s Cassidy, I like that you put descriptive words in your post. Something that I wish you would’ve included if you’ve ever had a perfect day that you described. This post has me wondering why you picked this as your perfect day.
Overall it was an amazing blog post, keep it up. Come visit me at http://blog.elanco.org/rosec970

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