The Share Table

Grrr…we can hare stomaresgraling in hunger . There so many kids at newHolindElementarethaty that are hungry . mrs.sneath ,can you help us bring the shar tadol into newhollahdy Elementary  school.

There should be som guid for sharing food.park food should be un opened. Paek food should be unugin because germs spread if it is  unugin . packaged and unugin from packrs . there are a lot of students in New Holland Elementary School that are hungry. A lot of students don’t get enough food. This is why we want to help our small part of the world. This is why we propose a “Share Table” at New Holland Elementary.  Mrs. Sneath, the students at your school are hungry. Research shows that students miss a lot of school because they get sick easier. Mrs. Sneath, do you want your students to be successful?  The facts above do not lie. Give us a chance to give the “Share Table” a try.  We challenge you to help us create a “Share Table.”

4 thoughts on “The Share Table

  • February 21, 2018 at 4:00 pm
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    That’s cool Legend, thank you for warning us about germs. I wish you would have put spaces between some of your words because it can get confusing when there are so many words in one bunch. And what is an unigin?

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  • February 21, 2018 at 4:02 pm
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    Hi Legend! My name is Christian! I like how you used an onomatopoeia in the beginning of your post! I wish you could have fixed some spelling and grammar errors. I wonder, is your name ACTUALLY Legend?

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  • February 21, 2018 at 4:05 pm
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    I like how you wrote the post. I wish you could fix the grammar, spelling, and put more spaces.

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  • March 9, 2018 at 3:14 pm
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    I like how you made the story
    I wish you would fix the grammar,spelling,and put more spaces.
    I wonder why there was so many errors.

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