The crime scene
The crime scene
there was a girl and she had a lot of friends and she also was a good person to everyone and one day she was lost and her friends were so worried and so was her family and after that they heard a loud noise coming from outside and then they heard a police.
Police:give that girl to me or you are going to jail.
Kidnapper:no I am going to keep her
Police: you better give her to me before you hurt her
Kidnapper: she will not get hurt by me because she likes me and she will never get away from me
Police: she doesn’t like you she hates you and she never will like you at all
Kidnapper: she does like me and she always will
Lost girl: I do not like you at all because you took me and it was rude and I want to know why you took me
Kidnapper: i took you because I do not like that you talk a lot
Police: you better let her go before I will tell your parents about this
Kidnapper: I’m still not letting her go
Police: then your going to jail
Kidnapper: aww man I don’t want to go to jail
Police: well you have to because you did not give me the little girl
Kidnapper: I would of if you would of stopped yelling at me like that
Police: seriously
Kidnapper: no just kidding I would of never gave her to you
Police: and that is why you are going to jail
Kidnapper: you will regret this
Lost girl: thank you for saving me I could of died if you would of never came
Police: you are welcome
Lost girl: I have a question to ask you
Police: what do you want to ask me
Lost girl: how did you know that I was kidnapped
Police: I heard really loud noises
Lost girl: oh yeah I know it was really loud because she was trying to hit me
Police: well are you ok from her hurting you
girl: yeah I’m ok
The next day
Girl : hi guys
girls friends:yeahh your back
Narrator: after school the girl that was lost went to the park and
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