What I am thankful for
What I am Thankful For
These are the three things I am thankful for. I am thankful for my family. I am thankful for my friends. I am thankful for my house.
I Am thankful for my family because if I’m lost they can find me. They keep me safe. They play With me. They sleep with me. They talk a lot with me.
I’m thankful for my friends because they have a lot of fun with me. They play with me. They talk to me a lot. They keep me safe. They are always there for me.
I am thankful for my house because It makes me sleep better than outside. It keeps me safe. It is warm. It is funer to live in a house than outside. It is funer to play with your toys inside than outside because if you play with it outside you can lose it and you will never find it because it is hard to find.
These are the three things I am thankful for. The first thing I am thankful for is my family. The second thing I am thankful for Is my friends. The third thing I am thankful for is my house. I am very fortunate to have such a great family, friends,and house.
Hi Ashley, this is Elise and I liked how you gave a couple of paragraphs to your story and how they gave details. I wish that you would put capitals in for the only places where you need them, and also when you wrote, “funer”, that actually isn’t a word it is supposed to be, more fun so you should probably fix that!!! I wonder if you would have wrote only three things you are thankful for instead of more. 🙂
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Hey Ashley it’s Brooklynn and I really liked the story. I wish you said more why you liked having really nice house friends and families. I wonder if you could visit my blog here’s the URL http://blog.elanco.org/groff67c/ thanks! Here are three things I’m thankful for my family my house and food shelter and water. Bye 🙂
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I like how you explained why you are thankful for those things. I wish you had put more things down that you are thankful for. I wonder what else you are thankful for. Come visit my thanksgiving story at http://blog.elanco.org/wenrich4kn/2016/11/22/thanksgiving/ and comment. (:
Nice job adding a lot of detail. I wish you would have not used the same words over and over again. I wonder if you had any help with this or you did it all on your own? please come visit my blog
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Hey Ashley, It’s Courtney! I really like that you wrote things specific. I wish you would of wrote more. Please come to my blog: http://blog.elanco.org/reicha283/
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hi Ashley it’s Lila I really liked how you said what you were thankful for and also the one word you used is not a word it is supposed to be more fun hope you come and visit my blog soon.
i think that it is sweet that your writing about what you are thankfull for
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Hi ashley it’s Lila i liked how you said what you are thankful for i wish you could fix the one part in your story because you capitalized your i and am and i wish you could fix it hope you can come visit my blog at http://blog.elanco.org/millis317/
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Hello, It sami I really like how you put big letters in… I wish you added more at the end. I wonder if you have any other thankful notes … thank you for commenting on my blog
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